On way too many levels, I completely agree with this.

It's like hard liquor, desperate and intoxicating. Perfect and spinning out of control with pillow-muted screams. Last two lines are killer.
~lyv

More powerful than love? You must have been upset to write that. 'twas very good. Very dark at the same time which is kinda cool.
Yay i have an admirer. Thank you for all the reviews, although i dont know how you managed to find all those nice words to say about me. Im not THAT great. I know im great but that great?
Nah only kiddin'. You gave me a confidence jumpstart never mind a boost.
Thanks again, and dont stop writing the good stuff.
S.O.s x

brilliant piece! i've read all ur work and i think ur amazing... keep writing!
chow!
p.s. feel free to look at my work if u have time!

WOW! A very different poem...but I like it!

Brilliant piece. Your obsession can be heartfelt, strong and poetic.

I would say "obsession at its finest" but it's not that extreme. A case of true love perhaps, and damn well written too. The imagery and ideas you've come up with. I can imagine this being done.

I love it. This is filled with drive, passion. You have an amazing talent. The imagery is beyond words. Completely brilliant. I look for passion above all things in writing, and you have given me what I look for. There are many writers who can arrange words so they sound pretty, but cannot fill the words. You have overflowed them. Thank you, for your writing.
Twilight and Velvet,
Kelly

i love it. The end is ..too perfect. In those short lines it shows so much emotion... Like a demented kind of love ( no offense, I'm not calling you nuts.) It's awesome.

...wow. -laughs- Intensenesses, man...

99.9% of men are pigs. Stay single and unattached. Trust me the modicum of happiness you get from a partner is (male/male, male/female, female/female, whatever) is not worth it. Just talk for a while, get what you need and give what your intuition tells you, then move on.
dating is way too dangerous. children just suck the life out of you. get serial friendships.
survive, just to ** everybody off that is trying their darndest to make you kill or kill yourself. If you stay true and alive, you will get the last laugh!

Interesting. Like it, it's unique. =D