 Mormon Princess 1 2004-08-08 . chapter 1You seem sorry. LOL YOu seem sorry for a lot of things that yos shouldn't be. I mean some of this just doesn't seem to be yor fault! |
 Violet Blues 2004-05-14 . chapter 1That was awesome. Oh wow!
-Violet |
 Songs of sorrow 2004-02-22 . chapter 1Had to get anything off your chest lately? Yay for you, its the best way, that way you dont end up equiping yourself with weapons of mass destruction and commiting family genecide. Hurah.
I dont know why you've put that you're sorry you cant go on. you're doing a pretty good job considering the atmosphere you live in. And anyone who says blacks a bad colour is a just a moron. Black rules, hurah for black. Ok, iv written an essay so il stop. Oh yeh and i admire you loads. Depressive poetry is always a good thing.
Keep up the great stuff
S.O.S. x |
 Crazy In 88 2003-12-31 . chapter 1That kinda leaves me speechless. I can feel you 100% on this poem. Sometimes i just wish i had the breath to say all that at once. NICE POEM! keep it up!
_angel |
 wingless 2003-11-29 . chapter 1so many sorrys... so many things you shouldnt have to feel sorry for...
it would be interesting to know the entire story... |
 drknglari 2003-11-29 . chapter 1Oh wow...-hugs you- That's insanely how I feel a lot of the times... |
 Seeker of the Way 2003-11-28 . chapter 1I hope writing continues to help you suffer through.
It's funy, but "I'm sorry" is already a dead phrase, just like wearing your ball cap backwards was killed DECADES ago, so this poem proves just how over-done and useless this phrase really is. It shows that even when someone like you MEANS it, it is stil a boring phrase to most people. |
 Roadside Dryer 2003-11-28 . chapter 1This is okay. If you didn't put I'm sorry every line it would be better, it getskinda boring that way. Another thing, stop being sorry. If you have to be sorry that much it's that person's thing. |