The first chapter is almost a poem, I like it, but the structure is...Blah...

gotta love the disappearing tricks...
now ya see em... now ya don't! lol...

heh..gotta love the ghosts.
but it's just the weed.. right?
...so... how does that explain me?

YAY!! Taylor! ::bounces:: Good school. Shame they built a fish tank... But it has a three story parking garrage for Seniors! That's an accident waiting to happen but how many kids can go "I'm parking in the parking garrage at school today!" Poor boy... Working too hard. Ghosts are scary! Weed my **. And he thinks calculus will save him from his weird cirle of thoughts!? ::gags:: He's more overworked than I thought...

seems 2 b interesting so far. i cant wait 2 see where u take this!

Hahaha! I'm amused by this kid! "Smart **" indeed. XD The plot of this story seems really interesting to me, and I can't wait to see where this goes! Now, what does this Ace person look like? I want some details! lol, Ganbatte ne! Ja! ^-^

Another Ace hmm? already amused by his antics.. this should be good

cool intro chica! definately pulls you into the story... can't wait to see where you take this...
::scampers off to the next chappie::

OOh this sounds interesting! I love the line about the endless shades of gray. This is a spectacular beginning.
if you have the time, check out If I'd Only Known by oncethrown. It's my story and i'm trying to get some feedback.

Nice prologue. Sounds like this could be an interesting story - I shall keep my eye on this one.