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Reviews For: An Untainted Love

Farewell My Sullen Concubin...
2007-07-24
ch 4,
abuseThis is quite good so far.
cOOkiMoNsteR626
2003-12-12
ch 3,
abusethis has a good plot, but i think u rushed everything too much. ur summary caught my attention, but i was a bit disappointed. everything was really fast...and the slang and the cussing...anyway, if u work on it some more, it'll be a great story
Weird girl
2003-12-12
ch 1,
abuseit's actually a good plot...i think she should've stopped talkin to julio after the rape and made sure he suffered in jail lol but im a bit aggressive :)...i cant wait to see wut happens...
FamousOneLiners
2003-12-05
ch 2,
abuseIt's sweet
Fae Caspian
2003-11-28
ch 1,
abusei very much like this, its a good idea, good job on spelling GONZALEZ
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