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| Farewell My Sullen Concubin... 2007-07-24 ch 4, | abuseThis is quite good so far. |
| cOOkiMoNsteR626 2003-12-12 ch 3, | abusethis has a good plot, but i think u rushed everything too much. ur summary caught my attention, but i was a bit disappointed. everything was really fast...and the slang and the cussing...anyway, if u work on it some more, it'll be a great story |
| Weird girl 2003-12-12 ch 1, | abuseit's actually a good plot...i think she should've stopped talkin to julio after the rape and made sure he suffered in jail lol but im a bit aggressive :)...i cant wait to see wut happens... |
| FamousOneLiners 2003-12-05 ch 2, | abuseIt's sweet |
| Fae Caspian 2003-11-28 ch 1, | abusei very much like this, its a good idea, good job on spelling GONZALEZ |