Great piece, the concrete descriptions, and especially the way you address the blade as if it was a person (since it can have the role of a lover ...), are very moving and effective. I hope you could keep it through. But please don't be ** yourself or feel bad or like a failure if you couldn't, it is a hard fight and no-one has the right to condemn you if you give in again, no-one, not even yourself. I wish you all the best. Much love, Eirien.

Good job, I like the descriotions you made, such as glistening against the black plastic. This is a job well done.
by the way, this is a little late, but thanks for your review

YEAH! GO YOU! *does a little victory dance for you* YIPPEE! if you can't tell that I'm happy you need a brain fix to allow to realize that. Okay okay. so maybe I'm a bit hyper BUT I JUST FINISHED THAT ACCURSED WESTERN HUM TEST! I HOPE IT BURNS ONE DAY!

Absolutely lovely. The wording in this is incredibly charming.

Yay!

well done on a truly remarkable poem. it spoke to me, i really like it. so, you won the battle with yourself and your razor? congrats.
this is definetely one for the favs.