So pretty... You did a good job. Shibby as usual. You always do so nicely with your work, and more often than not, they're in rhyming style. The others are right, you really can't find that too often.
~WZB~

I really like this poem. It's dark and realistic. I can so relate. Sometimes a scream is the only healing cure we can afford ourselves. Great work.
Can't wait to read more of your stuff. *K

ooh, very good, the rhyming makes this poem better. great job, I like it lots.
Tok
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tokiko

Nicely written. Very dark but deep. Rarely do you find those in poems that rhyme. Anyway good job.