XD! I liked this, though there were a few grammatical errors. Those can be fixed, so other than that, this story was hilarious. I'd like to see more humor works by you. ^^.
~Author Writer
P.S. Always remember... LOVE AND PEACE!! ^_^.\\//*
*I disclaim this line, it isn't mine.

Lol! That's one way to end it all. Good job, dude. :-D

Lol! It's going very well, I think. But your latest summary makes me wonder if you should perhaps next write about any death threats you may get. Haha. Peace!

Yo yo! great fight scene, lol. Keep up the good work. How many more chapers will there be? ... I demand an answer now, NOW!

I predict that the hamster will come out the worse for wear in this great, epic battle.

First, I liked the title and then wen I saw the story, its amazed me. U did nice job usin conversation, it made this sound better. Nicely done!
If u can, plz r and r some of my work too, it mean a lot to me~!
Thanks!