Wow...that is really awesome. REALLY awesome. I love this.

AMAZING! It's so so original i don't know how you thought of this...

Oh, too cool! I like it, the alliteration- very good!
Much love,
Megs

i want to say something great something heart lifting but i can't. I want to say everything will work out perfectly, and that sadness will all go away but i can't. I want to say this will be the hardest rejection you can face in your life but i can't. I want to say everyone cares and will always be there for you but i can't. Everyone doesn't care- there will always be a person with no sympathy for you or any of your problems (not me however). There will be bigger and greater rejections you must face and grin and bear it. There will always be those people who take your life and as if its malleable clay mold it into something heart wrenching a depressing. I can only say- I wish those incidents are sparse and few for you.

nice, nice. I 'specially enjoyed the lines about hopelessness and transformation. perhaps beneath would be a nice substitute for under in unpredictable

Ohh, I really like this. Not just your average rhyming poem. Very original and inspiring. Keep it up!

This one in particular pulls a lot of random ideas together in one spot it seems, but the corrolation you've used to tie everything together makes this an interesting little journey out of it as you read and follow along. A pleasure.

I LIKES!
~Octopus