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CrystalBallerina 2005-11-16 . chapter 5
wow, I really loved this one!It was so real and really brought back some vivid memories. Thanks for a great read!
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-10-09 . chapter 4
Saddening, tragic.
KASoroka 2005-09-19 . chapter 4
Nicely written. ^_^
KASoroka 2005-09-19 . chapter 3
I love your work, sad but wonderfully written.
KASoroka 2005-09-19 . chapter 2
excellent rythem,I enjoyed reading this.
KASoroka 2005-09-19 . chapter 1
beautifully written, but sad.
And she was left alone 2005-02-05 . chapter 3
all those poems are really good. I have to say, i really think that u should keep writing them, really good job!
dark88poet 2005-01-24 . chapter 1
riviting
Saggitaire 2004-11-06 . chapter 3
Wow. Where do you get the inspiration for all these poems? It was amazing!! write some more soon!! ^_^
Karma Police 2004-08-25 . chapter 2
Wow, really amazing poem. Made me pause after I read, which means it really was good. Very nice. :)
a e i o u and sometimes y 2004-08-25 . chapter 2
This was beautiful. You've got such an amazing style.
Hey, do you think sometime you might check out my stuff? *batters eyelashes*
Saggitaire 2004-08-25 . chapter 2
That was brillint. You're really good at poetry. ^_^
epephany 2004-08-05 . chapter 1
a compelling poem. I feel kinda sad n angry now :) it's touching but...provocative at the same time.. evocative ADN provocative. Anyway, put some others out there, I think they'll do well- u hav a unique style
sharwee 2004-05-04 . chapter 1
hey i love it, it's very fitting for many situations! anyway you're awesome keep writting!
whatica 2004-01-19 . chapter 1
this is really nice. and VERY TRUE. it makes sense to me! i love it! just one thing. if you are going to make a ryming poem, i suggest that you make the entire thing ryme. ( is that how you spell it? lol sorry cant spell) i noticed a few lines rymed but other than that it was free. it also had a very nice poetic rythem ( GAH NEED TO LEARN HOW TO SPELL CORRECTLY!) anywho. i liked it.
-whatica
ps: this review didn't make any sense did it?
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