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| Gir Garcia 2004-01-09 ch 1,  | abusei don't think ur a loser...i say he is. |
| -VeNuS- 2003-11-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove...is what everyone goes through in their life.If may be sorrow and it may be joy and only you who can determine it. So, cherish it while you still can :o) |
| xLecta 2003-11-29 ch 1, | abuseWOAH, i like. Wow it just goes together beatifully and the rhyme scheme was great. Great job |
| Maya 2003-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice poem. But do you really mean the things you say? I don't want to interfere with your affairs, but if you don't want anything that'll someday vanish, you'll end up with nothing at all. That's life. Nothing lasts forever, that's for sure. People keep saying that love isn't real if it isn't forever. But that's wrong. It can be real, it can be right for just one moment, and then it's worth it. Even if you get hurt. |
| Heaven Take Me Home 2003-11-29 ch 1, | abuseOh boy can I ever relate to this...I wish I would have had this a year ago...It's amazing honey. ~*Autumn*~ |
| Jamie-Face 2003-11-29 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem, I can totally relate to it. Don't call yourself a loser, you have really good writing skills! Good job and keep it up:) *~*candi*~* |
| It was not enough 2003-11-29 ch 1, | abuseFantastic! love it your not a loser because no one wants to be lead on in a sense.You dont need to correct anything because its just beautiful keep up the good work. Review some of my poems and youll see your not alone. |