i liek it.. its cool.. cuz the dress is so symbolic.. i love the line about the expiration daye... great poem!

Wow, even with a simple context of a DRESS you can make it into such a beautiful poem. I understand what this is about, growing up into "womanhood" or feeling self-conscius to wear it because I noticed you said "with the tender white flowers and slim waist." Ah, don't we all wish to be slimmer and feel comfortable in our own bodies, I sure don't *stomps* >_< lol anyway, very nice job yet again.
*Jenna*