you are a cupid.
laurel and randy. yippie

randy seems so shock that he know jared kiss cassandra.
is randy had a feeling to cassandra?

the first sign, jealousy.
and their first fight.

the both guy is possesive

her father is so brutal.
thanks God..randy found cassandra.

the kisses is so sweet and deep.
jared is so stupid, not tell her the truth about his feeling.
he can't mess girl's heart like that.
finaly cassandra speak up about her dad.

jared is so sweet. kiss her hand like that.
darrel just over reacting.
whoa...jared is going to kiss her.

cassandra should tell randy about her dad or report it to the school/police.
cassandra is so sweet to jared.

poor trisha. T_T
it's like trisha's dead bring jared and cassandra together.

omg! her father is so abusive. *shock*
i hope is not trisha in that accident.

the first attraction.
jared already like cassandra. ^_^

Fantastic! It totally made me cry in the end and i've been reading this all day long! Write on, write on!
Writer's Fantasy

You put such emotion into your writing it is incredible to read. I truly hope that you will continue reading this because I want to see what becomes of such a dynamic pair of characters. I cannot wait to read another chapter!

can u please keep writing its getting good and is cassandra going 2 get pregnant if not please make her

*Pokey pokey* Any chance you'll finish the story? It's amazing and I'd absolutely love to read more!