Reviews for Hunter Becomes the Hunted

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Belle Femme 2008-04-08 ch 5,	abuse"Maybe we can bribe a ** or something to keep him company while we escape." I love that line...its hysterical. I love western pieces and this certainly captures your attention
Silveralsa 2008-02-07 ch 1,	abuseHelo! So sorry, I've been busy, but I finally got to read & review! Very interesting start, lots of action :D Look forward to reading more!
aqua-angel 2004-01-11 ch 8,	abuseAWESOME ENDING! :) I'm glad Jesse and Cassie got married, and now i kno why Jesse doesn't like he's father. I can't wait to read the story based in New Zealand that you have in stored for us, I bet it'll be pretty exciting. I was going to do a story that was based in Thailand (I'm thai) but then i gave up on the idea and decided on New York :/ anyways, good luck with the new story!
aqua-angel 2004-01-08 ch 6,	abusegasp the horror! er... whose James Maloney? OH YAH, sorry brainfreeze. Wow, why did Jesse want his father dead? Seems kinda suspicious... the beginning was actually pretty cute. Unpredictable turnabout I thought, i can't wait for the next chappie! Update soon! :)
AmberEye 2004-01-05 ch 4,	abusewell this is a pretty good story but I think you shouldn't put in so many author's notes they're sorta annoying. but it's a pretty good start and I hope to read more soon
aqua-angel 2004-01-01 ch 5,	abusehehe they kissed! great chappie, i'm glad that she got caught up with her best friend. sniff it is sad about her brother though... sigh hope they catch the guy behind it all soon. Update soon!
Alixandra 2003-12-30 ch 4,	abuseHey...first of all, this story was very well written and original. secondly, in response to your review of "Molly", I would never do what "molly" did...my boyfriend will make it up to me..:-D somehow. glad yours treats you right, too. Thanks for R/R ing my story. ~Alixandra
aqua-angel 2003-12-26 ch 4,	abuseXD I got confused cuz well i dunno. I was curious on what happened at the dinner party b/c it wasn't mentioned in the beginning and then i went back to chappie 3 and it just seems new to me O.O did u edit or am i losing my mind? hm... must be the latter. Anyways i noticed you DID combine the ideas as you said u would... however i can't find where u said that. or maybe u did. Gah, too confused anyways, i'm glad ur writer's block is gone. update soon! Laterz and MERRY XMAS!
Dylan Wiles 2003-12-23 ch 1,	abuseIt's Jesse James isn't it?? Cool!Ill read on D
Dylan Wiles 2003-12-23 ch 4,	abusereally good stuff. I like your charactures and your words flow nicely.Good story. Check out my story on this thread It's called KID. R&R I'll put you on my authors list. D
Blood-Rose-36502 2003-12-22 ch 1,	abuseThat's a great story. Did you continue it else where? I will look and see ^_^ It's very interesting. And my dad is a western freak, so odd, but true, I like them too. ^_^ Hehhe. Great job. !
sleep all night rock all da... 2003-12-14 ch 3,	abusecool! update soon! and thanks for reviewing my story
aqua-angel 2003-12-09 ch 3,	abusepouts so short! I wonder what you're gonna do now... dangit, i can't believe jesse would just leave her there when he knows that she said his father may be the murderer! tsk... neways update soon!
HistoryLover521 2003-12-05 ch 2,	abuseNot a bad story. seems to be going a little fast now. Why would Jesse want to help her find out if it's her father's killer just so she can kill him? It really isn't making sense. Hopefully you'll make it more clear in further chapters.
slyraven 2003-12-03 ch 2,	abusehey so i thought id try to give u some ideas for ur story cuz i read it and thought it has some good potential. maybe to get cassie and jesse wanted, u could have jesse's father murdered and frame cassie. so jesse could take her away till they can find out who did it. or if u don't want to kill his dad yet u can have james killed. maybe he steals cassie away from jesse and she ends up killin him in self-defense. no one believes her (or shes so scared that they wont) that her and jes. take off and this gets them wanted. it seems to me that jesse is to eager for cassie to have revenge on his father. so maybe there should be some hidden agenda that'll make jesse want his father dead and for himself to be w/cassie. which she then finds out, gets mad, runs off, he tracts her down cuz hes madly in love w/her for real, and they live happily ever after. the end... well thats what i got for u. hope it helps a lil

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