|Reviews for If|
| Soviet 9/17/04 . chapter 1
Intresting fomrtaing but several longer lines killed the flow
| Grevola 4/19/04 . chapter 1
You have a nice steady rythm in this poem, though the rhymes can seem a bit forced in a few places. Oh well, happens to the best of us :P. I like it though, really shows the insecurities of not knowing what other people think, and I can relate.
| Rocky G 12/20/03 . chapter 1
To me it is a poem about questioning ones love. Well written!