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Wolf bathed in Star-light
2006-12-29
ch 1,
abusei like but why did crocodile tears fall from her eyes. cause i always thought crocodile tears meant fake tears. oh well. it was sweet!
Renzie
2005-08-20
ch 1,
abuseGreat story! ^^ Do you, by any chance, play neopets? oO; Sorry if you have no idea what I'm talking about. But your picture looks VERY familiar. And...uh, yea :P' Well, great job! I'll be sure to check out your other stories :)
AWFULie
2005-05-19
ch 1,
abuseawesome story.x3
Chanteusse
2005-04-25
ch 1,
abuseIt's well written and I like it. ^_^ Except for the part "Crocidile tears slipped past her eyes."

I'm not sure if you really meant 'crocidile' or you mean 'crocodile'. If it was the latter, then you misused the term. 'Crocodile tears' mean fake tears to make someone pity you and reulst to personal gain. heh. It doesn't mean something like big tears or whatever. :) Just something I'd like to point out.^_^

I still like it though. ^_^
Jameela
2005-04-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseAwesome!!
Maureen
2005-03-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseawe, thats so cute! yay for u! lol me like...good job! :-)
Jenna Mann
2005-01-09
ch 1,
abuseNew paragraph when someone speaks...

You could've drawn it on for longer.

THe mood changed from light to serious in very little time... the transition wasn't smooth.Nice try though.
Shahr
2005-01-04
ch 1,
abuseHeh, I like it, short as it is. Nice.
Amythist Rose Gebhart
2005-01-03
ch 1,
abuseI like your story! It's sweet, short, and to the point!
mw4h
2004-12-26
ch 1,
abusewoow.. short but nice ^^ loved it! nice theme of "when you say nothing at all"
beve
2004-11-04
ch 1,
abuseer...really short.u should've made it longer and made it into a real story!
Summas Angellove
2004-10-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseCute story, but not the best written.
fluffbug
2004-10-21
ch 1,
abuseWell written I enjoyed reading it =D
mogulgrl22
2004-10-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseomg this is really good
good plot n everything
i like the way u wrote it
good job
Allie
2004-09-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseAww how sweet. Can't remember if I've read it b4 or not. Loved it.
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