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| Wolf bathed in Star-light 2006-12-29 ch 1,  | abusei like but why did crocodile tears fall from her eyes. cause i always thought crocodile tears meant fake tears. oh well. it was sweet! |
| Renzie 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! ^^ Do you, by any chance, play neopets? oO; Sorry if you have no idea what I'm talking about. But your picture looks VERY familiar. And...uh, yea :P' Well, great job! I'll be sure to check out your other stories :) |
| AWFULie 2005-05-19 ch 1, | abuseawesome story.x3 |
| Chanteusse 2005-04-25 ch 1, | abuseIt's well written and I like it. ^_^ Except for the part "Crocidile tears slipped past her eyes." I'm not sure if you really meant 'crocidile' or you mean 'crocodile'. If it was the latter, then you misused the term. 'Crocodile tears' mean fake tears to make someone pity you and reulst to personal gain. heh. It doesn't mean something like big tears or whatever. :) Just something I'd like to point out.^_^ I still like it though. ^_^ |
| Jameela 2005-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome!! |
| Maureen 2005-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseawe, thats so cute! yay for u! lol me like...good job! :-) |
| Jenna Mann 2005-01-09 ch 1, | abuseNew paragraph when someone speaks... You could've drawn it on for longer. THe mood changed from light to serious in very little time... the transition wasn't smooth.Nice try though. |
| Shahr 2005-01-04 ch 1, | abuseHeh, I like it, short as it is. Nice. |
| Amythist Rose Gebhart 2005-01-03 ch 1, | abuseI like your story! It's sweet, short, and to the point! |
| mw4h 2004-12-26 ch 1, | abusewoow.. short but nice ^^ loved it! nice theme of "when you say nothing at all" |
| beve 2004-11-04 ch 1, | abuseer...really short.u should've made it longer and made it into a real story! |
| Summas Angellove 2004-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseCute story, but not the best written. |
| fluffbug 2004-10-21 ch 1, | abuseWell written I enjoyed reading it =D |
| mogulgrl22 2004-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg this is really good good plot n everything i like the way u wrote it good job |
| Allie 2004-09-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww how sweet. Can't remember if I've read it b4 or not. Loved it. |