i like but why did crocodile tears fall from her eyes. cause i always thought crocodile tears meant fake tears. oh well. it was sweet!

Great story! ^^ Do you, by any chance, play neopets? oO; Sorry if you have no idea what I'm talking about. But your picture looks VERY familiar. And...uh, yea :P' Well, great job! I'll be sure to check out your other stories :)

awesome story.x3

It's well written and I like it. ^_^ Except for the part "Crocidile tears slipped past her eyes."

I'm not sure if you really meant 'crocidile' or you mean 'crocodile'. If it was the latter, then you misused the term. 'Crocodile tears' mean fake tears to make someone pity you and reulst to personal gain. heh. It doesn't mean something like big tears or whatever. :) Just something I'd like to point out.^_^

I still like it though. ^_^

Awesome!!

awe, thats so cute! yay for u! lol me like...good job! :-)

New paragraph when someone speaks...

You could've drawn it on for longer.

THe mood changed from light to serious in very little time... the transition wasn't smooth.Nice try though.

Heh, I like it, short as it is. Nice.

I like your story! It's sweet, short, and to the point!

woow.. short but nice ^^ loved it! nice theme of "when you say nothing at all"

er...really short.u should've made it longer and made it into a real story!

Cute story, but not the best written.

Well written I enjoyed reading it =D

omg this is really good
good plot n everything
i like the way u wrote it
good job

Aww how sweet. Can't remember if I've read it b4 or not. Loved it.