Hello hello!
This is Tae! Ataea and Yami Ataea are both off doing stuff. Very nice poem. Describes MANY guys i know~_~ lolz.

A very orginal piece you have here! I love these words you used, "avatar, resplendent," all of them flowed perfectly together. Nice work!
Keep writing.
-Seras

ooh its awesome!! Very original, vincey.

Hey sweet. Never get to talk to you anymore!! This must change. Gosh.. I sure hope you're not the one you speak of in this poem. I liked it, but I got caught up in it hoping that it wasn't you... anyways,
with love always,
Raye