Oh...the imagery is amazing here. Beautiful poem, I like the idea. Great job _
winged one

Excellent poem - the imagery was really powerful, and the emotion was well done and descriptive, good use of similies too, it was interesting to read as it didn't rhyme but still read very well and had a good rythem to it.

Meaningful poem. You painted some nice images in this. I particularly like the second stanza, and the ending. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

Well written, an accurate interpretation of the pain one feels at their mistakes; but does not give up hope for a better future.

oh, you must be an emotional person. someone who feels things deeply. it hurts, doesn't it? to others it doesn't matter, but you feel it. and it feels so strong.
let's be friends. i think i understand how you feel.

I think this poem is bril the words don't ryme but the word flow like water such talent