Hey I'm glad I came across your stories.. This and the first are really interesting. You should finish them some day.

So Satan loves Ana? In the first story I thought he was just using her. When did he start loving her? Does Ana love Lucifer? Or does she love Michael, I don't like Mike. I just don't like how they are kinda brother and sister. Ewy... Hope you update soon!!

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what? the star is bleeding and scarring... what the hell happened? poor lar.. jeeze..

EKK!! Polaris!! NU! T-T Can I smack Lu? Can I can I? XD Stupid boy. Yeah, Satan needs help. Probably more than Lu could help him with... unless it's one of those I kill you and take your body deals. And don't we kno that's always fun! lol You better not have Polaris maimed too bad. Good job so far! Ganbatte ne! Ja! ::glomp::

aw.. poor satan.. SUCKS TO BE YOU! .. sorry.. had a small bitter moment... heh..

o_O ek Bad Satan! Bad! Kowaii desu ka!! How'd he get Lu... Shouldn't someone have noticed?!?! Chu! Poor Lu... T-T Now you have to write more of this soon cause I need to see what Lu does! Ganbatte ne! ::glomp!:: Ja! ^-^

nice.. lu as a healer and satan out to overthrow God... again...
isn't it great?

Congratulations! Your writng style seems to have improved in this chapter. Your structure gives a better backbone to the story, and I applaud the improvement. Everything seemed very clear in what your were trying to have the audience witness. Your earlier chapters were abit weak, and didn't quite convey a standard image to the readers. Keep working hard, your story is very amusing.

WHY isn't it Lu?! Damn Satan! ::throttles and shakes him:: Bad Satan! He's all like "I love you!" but... does he think that's supposed to make Anael feel better? ::raises eyebrows:: I think he doesn't understand that his love, being Satan and all, isn't that much of a desired thing. Lol. Ah well, write more soon! ^-^

You just had to go and make it all depressing didn't ya?! ::pouts:: Damn Lu and his non-physical **. lol. Glad to know he helped her out of her little mind trap there though. I like what you have so far, so start writing more! XD Ganbatte ne! Ja! ::glomp:: ^-^

whoo..
i hate finals..
but whoo! seth and sage cursing in accents! lol.. this should be amusing..

did you... put Ana... in a COMA?!?!?! ::tackles:: Why are you so mean to these people!! ::shakes back and forth:: But at least the calvary is here. Well... I guess you would call Seth and Sage that. XD As long as they don't kill eachother first. Write more soon!! Need more info on what's happened to everyone and Ana!

Hey good start but why why not raphael...and no seperation thingy but oh well at least mike is safe. And Kim is going to be an interesting character

"Do you know how many God forsaken Kimberly's there are on this accursed planet!?"
WHOO!! ::rolls:: That's some funny ** right there. But why is Michael's hair still long? Is he really in his angelic form? Hope he doesn't run into people that know him as Mike... And what happened to Lu?!?! T-T Write more soon! I'm so curious as to what happens next! Ganbatte ne! Ja! ^-^

Whoo hoo! first comment goodness! mwah ha ha!
neway! looks like the character counts gonna jump aye? i like george! should be fun should be fun.. and getting into fun and dandy controversy.. always a bonus!