   the-real-mo 2004-07-01 . chapter 5hehe. awesomeness. *grins*
i will update... someday... *sigh*
hope you're havin' yourself a damn good summer! |
| the-real-mo 2004-05-04 . chapter 4 BWAHA! when are you gonna submit the stuff we wrote last week? XDXD
-mo |
 Gretchen45 2004-04-28 . chapter 1 im a writer 2 and well ur story is very teenagery which i love!! da romance wit samantha and chris is abit sudden u shud xplain how dey met r got togetha r y dey r even 2getha!! u shud also giv scott and julie a betta entrance!! otherwise da base material is dedly!! keep writin lov ya Gretchen45 |
 Lellida 2004-04-20 . chapter 4Silent rock...*contemplating* Short, but interesting. Try to drag out the event more by adding detail in between and stuff. I liked the bit about the shoes. |
 SumiFritzN 2004-04-19 . chapter 4Hey! I like this story! Thanks. Yeah, it did take off SOME of the stress. Too much to be taken away from me, though, but it did help. Anyways. I like this. It's definatly along the same lines of our little email story, but so? It's good. The only thing I guess I can suggest is a little more descriptions. That's all really. Anyways, good job! I want an update soon! But then, who am I to talk? I take so much longer than you in updating my stuff. Still! Hurry! lol
~Nikki~ |
| kate barrie 2004-01-09 . chapter 3 jeez lauren, i didn't realize you were soo horny. see you in school. |
| the-real-mo 2003-12-19 . chapter 3 yay you posted it!
HINTS! :
1) make separate paragraphs! if your computer is screwing it up when you upload the story, amke sure each new paragraph is indented.
2) every time a new person speaks, make a new paragraph!
3) angst? there's angst in this?? hahaha
4) HAVE A GREAT BREAK! i hope all of your holiday wishes come true! no bio class for two weeks!
byebye
-mo |
| Lellida 2003-12-18 . chapter 3 wow.. you have WAY too much fun writing this don't u. tsk tsk u naughty child. O well. evil old granny smith. mwahaha. sounds like megan when she gets older... |
| the-real-mo 2003-12-18 . chapter 2 gah! you said you'd post all that stuff we wrote where is it? hahaha keep it up i promise i'll help you write more as soon as possible... jaa ne!
-mo |
| Lellida 2003-12-07 . chapter 2 Ok, this is getting just wrong. Eww. Too wierd to think of you writing this. The old lady part was funny though... |
 moska 2003-11-30 . chapter 1I like. I don't know why, I just like it. More paragraphs (like when they're talking) would make the huge blocks of text not so huge though. Keep writing. |
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