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Winter's Roar 2004-02-09 . chapter 1
An honest poem that i think most people can relate to. I have a question though, in the second line of the second stanza did you mean "thats the way from now on" or did you mean to end with just now? Anyways, love this poem, love it. It's blunt and seems to have hidden emotions. The tone is emotionless but within the words we sense a longing for change from the constant bitterness. Interesting and well written!!
~ winter
aode 2004-01-11 . chapter 1
These are the things that I usually put in my poems. Nice one, though. Better than mine. Good work, and keep writing.
wastedlovexxx 2004-01-10 . chapter 1
this poem is **
simpleplan13 2003-12-02 . chapter 1
I cant really relate... but i love the last stanza
superfufu 2003-12-01 . chapter 1
bitterness bites the skin, the pain is sweet. mercy is a lie. to forget is a choice.
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