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Youkos-demon 2004-01-10 . chapter 1
Interesting, not the best poem of yours, I've reviewed, but good.
'To hear we must be heard
To be heard we must hear'
Those two lines have a flaw. A person can be born deaf and can speak perfectly but has never heard a single sound. Unless, the meaning goes deeper than just what a person would think while simply reading it.
silverbluehues 2003-12-25 . chapter 1
Facts...true, very true.
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