Theres so much emotion in this one, but I can't seem to name one. It's almost a whirlwind. Each stanza could stand quite well on its own, but together they create something... something strong. Something unbreakable. I wonder if that will make sense to anyone but me.
The second stanza is my fav.

Yep, small things usually matter the most, so it would make sense that they would cause the most harm.. Great write, this one, I like it a lot. Keep writing..

Good, but it would help if it were longer.

I really enjoyed it. I liked how you used both endings and beginnings ( "no endings" and "you start")