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| loves-first-kiss 2003-12-13 ch 1, | eh... it seemed a bit... odd. i dunno. but it was something that said the same thing over. and i can unserstand why you'd do that, i mean, i do it all the time, but it's like, saying the exact thing. i dunno, i can't really think right now, and i'm having a rough thing to deal with right now, but this is all good. i suppose. but anyway... keep writing |
| FearOfClowns 2003-12-02 ch 1, | Wow. That was good, I like how you wrote it, and it flows really well. But can I make just one suggestion? I think that it should be a bit longer, because just as I was getting into reading it, it was over. This is merely my point of view. Great Job! |