You've got a very "Kill Bill" thing going on here. Continue it!

This is SO COOL. IT'S GREAT! I love it, really. It's slightly morbid, but really pleasing . . . and no, I'm NOT being bloodthirsty again . . .

That's morbid, in an oh-so enjoyable way. I hope you know that. Maybe you should use this as your E.A.Poe story.
~LG~