Yeah, pretty cool. I liked some of the lines a lot 'and perhaps in my dreams I will sing for thee' was great, and 'sun deprived plants' rules.
Awesome, in every way, shape and form.

'lo, dahling ... I've got a few exams tomorrow/Friday, but I wanted to pop along and see some of your new works.
... and what can I say? I absolutely ADORED this. *adores* The STANZA BREAK additions - I assume these aren't part of the poem, ne? lol ... if you just couldn't format the thing properly, mail me and I'll explain. If they're intentional (which I doubt, but you never know) they are unsightly and break up the flow of the poem.
Now. Let me go into analysis mode.
A touch of critique - some fo the punctuation could be re-worked; you've used a slightly confusing mixture of capital and lower case letters. I'm not sure if some are intentional, but others serve to confuzzle me and interrupt the flow again ...
I loved the first 3 lines. So powerful. There is a shadow of bitterness, disgust, depondency about it and the rest of the stanza that appeals. Come to think of it, that entire stanza ... *babbles*
I LOVE COMPOUND WORDS. You mighta figured this out, lol ... I mean by that, 'lay-bacl' feeling. Only suggestion is 'fall into it' could look great if you did the same thing to it - 'fall-into-it' feeling instead. I know JUST the feeling you mean, and that was a great way of putting it. *sniggers* This Is crazy looked great with those caps.
I'd remove the comma after 'green', and then that stanza would be flawless, sublime ... the choice of words hit me hard ... I so thoroughly enjoyed that, I can't even begin to describe. The title. The overall mood, the feeling it presented to me ... it just ... fit.
Damn, dude.
I'll be back tonight, hopefully, to read more. Biochemisery now, just to soothe my conscience ...
Damn ...