Reviews for Can't Change My Face

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LittleLimerick83 2005-04-09 ch 10,	Great cliffhanger. I'm anxious to find out what happens next. I love the element of suspense you've created here.
LittleLimerick83 2005-04-01 ch 4,	Good stuff. And I've learned something today. I never realized that tensity is a word. spiffy. I'll catch up soon I promise.
LittleLimerick83 2005-03-31 ch 3,	I'm attempting to catch up. I didn't realize you'd done so much. there's something wrong with my author alerts, and i'm not being notified of peoples' updates. It's irritating. Anyway I really like the element of suspense you've got going here. Great job. I'll try to catch up as quickly as I can.
The Death Whisperer 2005-03-29 ch 10,	eek!! you must update now!! I cannot wait until the next chapter! ~"...your earthly ways are strange. please, what is this so-fa of which you speak?..." ~Starfire (Teen Titans)
LittleLimerick83 2005-02-19 ch 2,	I've just started reading this. it's a bitdifferent than what i'm used to seeing on here. very creative. not at all like the modern romance I seem to be obsessed with writing. I love the way you tell the story from both characters' perspective in the first person. multiple narrators are tricky to work with, but your transitions are quite smooth. okay i'll stop being an English major and analyzing this to death. excellent work(and btw thanks for reviewing mine!)
jess chan (eagleseye) 2004-12-15 ch 9,	heyo! hope u find time to continue! Btw, the problem's still there. The text is fine, it's just the punctuation marks. It's the same with the reviews u sent me, too, except there I can't read the text either. Maybe you should contact the admin here...I don't know. Cya
Eagleseye 2004-11-06 ch 9,	Cool. You got me wondering what all this is about. Just wanted to let u know that the commas and quotation marks came out all funny. U might wanna upload it again...
AuroraNightSky 2004-10-29 ch 9,	Hey Hey! long time no update! lol, just joking. Don take me seriously. I was really hapy wen i saw u updated. Literally, I jumped out of my chair and yelled "YES". Weirdo me 0_o Um, i got a lil confused in some areas cause(now i don kno if others had this prob or not), but those little " " marks weren't there on my comp. Sometimes i couldn't tell wen someone was talking or thinking. Anyway, thats my only concern, so have a wonderful beautiful fantastic day and update again soon!
Klanfer 2004-10-29 ch 9,	I LOV IT I LOVE IT OH I LOVE IT I LOVE IT it could use a little itsy bit more explanation. Like... the master appears at Orion's place... but didn't she have to travel a long way to get there in the first place? Did she say bye to Orion.. My computer is mucking up so i may have missed a few paragraphs. It cuts off the buttom sometimes ta'z luv I LOVEI T
Dancer of Dreams 2004-08-19 ch 1,	Wow! THat is all i can say. THat is an amazing beginning. Very gripping. I cannot wait to see what comes next.You are a very talented writer.
animegurlie91 2004-07-24 ch 1,	good story! update soon please!
kaika switched 2004-07-19 ch 8,	I love stories in first person. It's so easy to get into great detail on the main and most important character, but sometimes it's hard to focus on the other characters, letting out enough information for the reader even though you know everything about them. I think things are going good. Keep writing!
AuroraNightSky 2004-07-02 ch 8,	Ooh, really kool so far! I wonder what is gonna happen at Drazca. Anyway, I don't want either one to die sniffle;). It's seems I've gotten to like each one so much, that I don't want either one to go. Oh, well, its ure choice lol. Please update soon! ~Aurora~
n3ssa 2004-06-23 ch 8,	cool story. update!
Princess Chloe 2004-06-20 ch 8,	Hi again! I see you updated at long last. Good for you! Well, this chapter was short. And the dialogue between Orion and Siuan was a bit stilted, but all right. I wonder what Siuan's going to do in Drazca. That should be interesting. Well, I hope you have a somewhat happy ending! Or at least, if it's sad, it's extremely well-written so I can enjoy it anyway. Love this story. Update soon! ~Chloe

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