hehe... I love your story... so random... and funny... and I like pizza and candy! yummy... Anyway, I like this ending. Again, so random and funny! Okay, I'll go now. Bye-bye!

Wow I'm really impressed. . . havent read all the way through but i hope to soon. . .

my gosh, Lauren. You're all done now. just be happy that it was so great. dork. : - p : - D

NO Its over? Tear...You whould write a reunion thing. lol. That would be funny. lolLauren

YAYAYAYAYA! I love this chapter! But didnt liz say that banana thing to me in real life? i dont remember. DONT MAKE ARES DIE! PLEASE? lol. But seriously...please? WRITE MORE! I heart you!Lauren

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! *kisses* thank u!

Carrie enjoyed your story a lot & wants you to write the next chapter ASAP!I do too!

I love corny jokes! They were so cool. I'lkl need to visit that website...

yay! Your writing is so funny and fun to read. also I have heard the myth about the hero being thrown of pegasus' back.

I think that Mr squeaky id my fave character even though he is an inanimate rubber duckie. Also You really should write a Jason chapter that would be so funny.

I did think this was alot like Colleen's chapter (i think it was colleen I can't remember?) but it was still really funny.

Cool. I liked this chapter by I didn't get who Becca actually was.

I liked this chapter. It was good for a bit of relife from the violence and romance! Tee hee hee...

Yay! I'm loving this story. The last bit with the voodoo dolls was good.

Yay! i didn't get to finish reading the rest of the story yesterday. I love this chapter, MONKEYS! Don't ask :) Are you Lindsay? This is just a random guess...