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| Shandris 2004-03-09 ch 1,  | abuseI'd think you should read my poem An Epiphany in snow to find my feelings about snow! *I know shamless plug!* I too was like that when I was young but now I hate the snow! It depresses me, but I can look beyond that and say this piece was well written! |
| James Rain 2004-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI love this story even more than "Chocolate Smoke." I don't really know why I like it, other than the fine way it is written, but something is wrong with the apostrophes. |
| Just Wolf 2003-12-05 ch 1, | abusei loved that! it was so ... refreshing. the ending was brilliant. "i'm alive and i'm healed and i love the snow" that was such an ecyleptic (sp?) beautiful tantalizing sentance. that was a great story. it threw me abruptly intot he moment and yanked me out again just as i was getting into it. which i think is a very very good thing even if that doesn't really sound like a compliment. |