i luv this. so true so tru. it seems tho (as my english teacher always tells us) ur forcing in the rhymes. Everyone does it, I do, but if u did, u got away with it. ;-)
CA

Even though this is an older poem, it is a good one. I DO however understand that is was an older work, but as I said, you did a very good job. You expressed yourself quite articulately. (I doubt I spelled that right, but you get the idea.)

Too true, too true, too true. Loneliness can kill. I was nearly broken by loneliness when I was a child, but somehow, I managed to rise above it. Good poem.

this is an overly prosaic hyper-trite piece that gives nothing new. It is not dark/emo enough to affect the reader (*slash* make me barf) nor is it light/humourous enough to...well...affect the reader.
but hey
its a start
zac
clownpuppet87@aol.com
ps in your style...3/10

Kool! I like it (& I don't normally like poetry)! Very good ^_^