Reviews for Black Loneliness - FictionPress.com

Bamboti 2004-04-07 ch 1,	i luv this. so true so tru. it seems tho (as my english teacher always tells us) ur forcing in the rhymes. Everyone does it, I do, but if u did, u got away with it. ;-) CA
Celest Covax 2004-02-02 ch 1,	Even though this is an older poem, it is a good one. I DO however understand that is was an older work, but as I said, you did a very good job. You expressed yourself quite articulately. (I doubt I spelled that right, but you get the idea.)
Grey-eyed-dream-chaser 2003-12-10 ch 1,	Too true, too true, too true. Loneliness can kill. I was nearly broken by loneliness when I was a child, but somehow, I managed to rise above it. Good poem.
suckerplucker 2003-12-09 ch 1,	this is an overly prosaic hyper-trite piece that gives nothing new. It is not dark/emo enough to affect the reader (slash make me barf) nor is it light/humourous enough to...well...affect the reader. but hey its a start zac clownpuppet87@aol.com ps in your style...3/10
Shadowz the Silver Wolf 2003-12-04 ch 1,	Kool! I like it (& I don't normally like poetry)! Very good ^_^