That is a great poem...I wish I could write poetry.

this poem is my relationship with my mom on paper i feel like the words were ment to discribe me and mom so thanks

v.v.v. good! can totally relate! i've had a poem of mine in a book! haha!

well damn ur a good writer and now ive found out ur a good poet keep going its wonderful
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this reminds me of some of the poems I wrote when I split from my boyfriend, he just left me like the way it says in this poem, it hurst doesn't it?! Please read some of my poems you might be able to relate like I have done to yours. :-)

Wow, not half bad! It really feels like uve just written ur emotions there.
BTW, thanks for reviewing my work. :) I like to know what ppl think. I'm 18.
Good job on this one. Its quite... emotional. :) *thumbs up*