i like this. reminds me of one of my days. i love the ending. break free, that can be hard to do -.-

oh that's a really good poem!

Great poem. I love it.

thanks for the review!and i must say you are one of the only peeps to get me to read a whole poem!but you have a way to make your readers feel like they are the one writing the poem!keep writing cuz reading is the only thing that keeps me sane some days!later

how very cheerful! good but sad v.v.v. sad, i'd h8 2 feel like that.

nowt like being happy is there? smile! good but a bit morbid! haha

so sweet! =)

great poem keep them coming
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beautiful poem!