Cool! Loved the symbolicosity (hehe ;) one of my made up wordosity)On a more serious note, it was great,you obviously (unlike me;)) have a talent (uhoh here it comes , the really dodgy end phrase) keep writing!
(there you go told you it was coming!!)

Excellent, man. Truly awesome. This poem has deep meaning in so many ways. Keep up the great work man.
- Daisuke Yamasaki

I don't think it is insulting my intelligence explaining your own work, it is just taking away the magic of own interpretation...
GREAT POEM!
Nice analogy, very cleverly written, with a lot of text...

Sorry I haven't reviewed lately; I've been a mite busy.
I really like the imagery in this.. Relating it all to rain, or water.. very nice. Telling the proper way to read it was helpful, also. I love the line, "There is still room for you in this ocean." Great job! Your poetry is still in my top ten of favorites!

oh my gosh i love it! at first i was like what the hell i don't get it. Then.. i was like oh, oh, sad. but i love it. i can't say anything but that! i hope your others are like this. i don't know, I love it.