hey sup baby!, u dont knw me but im just a guy who loves to draw, but im on a creative drawing blockish thingy, so im writing instead. but my friend goes to this deviantart.com thingy, so i went there and go all jeleous of this gurls art, but i was like i dont care, she aint got nothin on me when it comes to shortstories or songwriting. but then i saw ur link and yea... so needless to say ur stories piqued my intrest, i read ACE, and it was pretty kool, but it was when i got to this story that i got hooked, yea so anywayz on with the ** review already!
the dialoge in ur stories, humorous but believealbe, its well written. but wheres the discription. its more like a screen play then a story. when we r first introduced to the character, we get only a taste of situation, u say she thinks its primitive but describe how. explain her first impressions of the place, is she disapointed but slightly turned on by its simple design, or is she completely disgusted by this dingy apartment, details gurl, details! btw...that name is my aim so if u ever wanna contact me that would do, oh and i also use harlememinence@hotmail.com, but my computer is actin a fool so im havin trouble checkin it, peace!

hey hun I'm gonna read this but you gotta give me time to catch up on the 30 chapters of vairious stories I'm behind in first kk? I'm saving them all to disk.

I like it, very nice. I like Pandora, she rocks in her sweet evilish way.
I was kinda surprised to see that you've finally updated, I'm glad though.
Well, 'pose that's it, by the way, how you like the hair? ^_^
Later,
~Ffuffy~

You have your character with a hooker, and you yell at me for a few kisses?! That's not right, man...

uhoh? need i say more, sar? cant wait for the next chapter, i want to see how much more havoc luci can wreck in one day. *smiles evilly*
~K~

Sometimes you really scare me and this is one of those times. Maybe its just late and maybe its just me, but that was freaky. The whole blood sucking and killing and that it could have happened to Dan... I dunno, I'm not focused at the moment. I blame it on ice cream. Awesome as always!

might i just mention, again that cliffhangers bug me. They are good for a story and this one was really good, but I wanna know what happens!! and poor Avidan, that has gotta suck. Keep going! i want more!

yeah, my reviews are usually short but it happens. lol. anywho, this is good, i definitly wanna read more so you'll have to email me when you update, otay? lol. otay, ill wait...
~K~

Amara! I'm sorry I can't talk much,cause, well, I have to get off the computer.*mutters under breath* Parents. *claps hands together* I can't wait for the next juicy chapter!

Amara! Hi! Again! This chapters nice and juciy! The blood and action! Wow... a lot of blood... and action... pretty much all...blood
...and... action... *snaps out of it* Good job Sarah!

Amara! It's me! Sakura! *e hem* I must say, your writing passes even my own... *sob* You've done good, and I'm sorry that I've never had the time to read such a nice fic! I'll being reading some more!
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Hey you! I read and reviewed! You used the ideas I came up with! Yay! I is happy! No more caffeine for Ali...bad idea. Buh-bye!

I like the story, so far though i know nothing about it soo, I feel sorta in the dark. Odd roomies...
Later Dude,
~FFuffy~

The introduction of the characters at the begining helped give background information about each character. I personally liked the plot twist at the end with Japhuu and Luci. I really enjoyed the fight between Japhuu and Luci in the third chapter. Great dialogue and comic moments with Pandora and Luci. Overall it is an exellent story.

Is this based on anything? No, it can't be...oh well, I still don't get it, but there are fights so I am happy.