a new dark-lullaby way of looking at the moon. so when are you going to write her eulogy?

This is so beautiful! and it invokes such powerful images! How so many lives go on simultaniously(spelled that wrong...) and all under the watch of the moon and with bad luck so unsuspectingly awaiting them.Very very good.

Very beautiful, powerful in a not so powerful way, for lack of better words. As always you're flow is perfect. I've only one suggestion, and that is to use "that is dead, remember?" because I believe that would be gramatically correct, and would sound better with the following line, in which you use the word "which". (How'd you like that sentance?)
Anyway, good job, another triumph. Keep it up.