Reviews for Seeing Through You

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translusantbutterfly 2005-04-26 ch 2,	abuseirelly like your story and wish you'd update cuz its a graet start but it needs more if you want to keep our intreaststhanks for writing
KattyJay 2005-01-29 ch 2,	abuseThis is an interesting and adicting story. I would like to see some updates soon please. I'll annoy you till you do if you don't. And you know I will. (Well you might not know that right now but don't think I won't)
Gypsy Pen 2004-06-19 ch 2,	abuseenjoying the story, can't wait to find out what happens in next chap. i don't mind the short chapters, they are still good, just keep them coming! lol. i like the way you are building the characters and story, keep it up.
Gypsy Pen 2004-06-03 ch 1,	abuseaww... i like your style in writing this... sad though. I wrote a series of short storys where the fathers were abusive, but i never wrote it actually happening, just the affect it had.(Basketball girl) but i like that you put it in.
Ashley the Fair 2004-04-17 ch 2,	abuseCongrats on getting over the writer's block; I know how that is. Anyway, great chapter. I'm intrigued, so update soon. And did Darren's friends throw her against the locker or something? ~Ashlita
Endowment's Seraph 2004-04-17 ch 2,	abusethis caught my attention again, and while I was reading the first chapter I couldn't helpbut think, "i've read this before.' And I had, I'm glad you updated, this is really a great story. Best of luck getting throught the writer's block, what helps me sometimes is that I just start typing whatever comes to mind, then I review it, and see if it's fine. ~Mel
Dream and Write 2004-04-16 ch 2,	abuseYou caught the readers attention, gave great description and made an overall great story. Keep writing and you continue getting good reviews. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your works. http://ucps.proboards30.com/
Needs an arrow from the ins... 2004-04-16 ch 2, anon.	abuseNO FAIR!! I want to write more just like you. It was a good chapter. You definitely have an intrigue going and it makes me wnat to read more...but there is no more. The solution to that...more chapters! Great Job Dahling!! ~Lisa~
BlueEpiks13 2004-04-16 ch 2,	abusethis is touching story...i want to see how it ends...updae soon
Adders721 2004-04-16 ch 2,	abuseI like your story. I am glad youa re over your writer's block. Can't wait for more. ~lovelynebula~
NeWriter 2004-04-16 ch 2,	abuseVery good as well although I kind of got confused because Melony's name was just introduced this chapter. Good feelings here and character's descriptions!:P I'll keep reading ;)
NeWriter 2004-04-16 ch 1,	abuseIt has a very good description at the beginning which chatches the readers' attention; and the setting as well... the background of the character's haven't told us anything, yet they aren't hidden a lot... there's just enough to see what you're going into... great work!
clarity of conscience 2004-02-10 ch 1, anon.	abusewow, this is really great work too. i hope you update this, or atleast have an idea of where it's going. i am still hooked on the ripple affect. by the way, i think it should be ripple effect, might want to look it up.
BellezAzul 2003-12-27 ch 1,	abuseNice story again. Update soon, ok?
Raine0211 2003-12-27 ch 1,	abuseYou're welcome! I'm sor reading this. I love it. It's really great. Hehe. I remember you showing me this idea. I love ya girl. Keep up the good work. Run anything by me that you feel necessary. ~Lisa~

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