well written.
excellent diction.
very thought about and charastic of you

That's really good...
Really nice to hear a piece about music, considering how much I love music itself.
A couple of parts sounded a bit scratchy, but I really like what you wrote there :)
I have a couple of qualms, but I'll keep them to myself mostly... 'cept for one... you typo'ed "magic". Was that intentional?