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Tomorrow 2001-01-16 . chapter 1
I want to review this. Your poem was beautiful, and the words jumped out of the page and into my heart. It was music to my ears, for i could feel the passion and brutal hurt that came with the emotions that this poem elicited. No, never shall we be ready, but our faith in God will MAKE us ready when we must face our end. Until then, we cower as infant babes towards the ideal of death, and only do we grow wise when the Father is by our side. God will forever be with you.
Original Sin 2000-12-19 . chapter 1
::gasp!:: you don't want any reviews?! why?!
p.s: i like your pem and you can't stop me from saying that!!!HAH!
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