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| W. Griffin 2008-03-16 ch 1,  | abusethat is really good! -w. griffin |
| Celest Covax 2004-02-02 ch 1, | abuseI loved your use of phrases like "haunting rainbows" (like it's supposed to be beautiful, but there is a pain that overpowers and will not go away) and "decaying papers", it sets the mood very well. And the overall poem is a very good one indeed, one in which I can relate to. Excellent work, keep it up. |
| Grey-eyed-dream-chaser 2003-12-10 ch 1, | abuseAnd I thought I was one of the only ones who liked the descriptive poems like that, especially those who have that little twist in the end LOL. Very good. I like your writing style and tone in this one. |