that is really good!

-w. griffin

I loved your use of phrases like "haunting rainbows" (like it's supposed to be beautiful, but there is a pain that overpowers and will not go away) and "decaying papers", it sets the mood very well. And the overall poem is a very good one indeed, one in which I can relate to. Excellent work, keep it up.

And I thought I was one of the only ones who liked the descriptive poems like that, especially those who have that little twist in the end LOL. Very good. I like your writing style and tone in this one.