Interesting person, that Darius... Again, my main complaint is that it was far too short, but what you have is fine.

Hmm... I like it. Your descriptions are quite a bit better than mine, I think. A bit short, but it's not really that much of a problem. I'll continue to read tomorrow, and I look forward to it.

Great chapter, but it looks like I'm going to have to go back and check out your edited versions of the former chapters! They look alot better at first glance, so maybe I'll get it done this weekend, ok?
Anyways, keep up with the good work!

Hey bud, when can we be expecting an update?

Cool, loving it. I like Dalanth's character, he seems pretty interesting. Thanks for the review on THe Order in Chaos!
You might want to make your chapter a wee bit longer though, you only give us a little snack each time you update.

Not much to say, well update often and you'll get reviewed by me often.
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Long? I like long.. btw do you think my chapters should be longer?
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A lot better speed in this chapter, I am glad you like my story!
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Keep this story up! It's a bit short and a bit rough, but the mystery of everything has me curious, I'll read your next chapter when school is over.

Ah, the conniving type, eh? Cool, very interesting so far.
Darius seems to be a little paranoid, but I liked the touch of humor. Unless of course that turns into more than just humor... Hm... Nah, Darius just sounds spoiled is all. Keep up the good work, good for you that you updated right away!

This seems good so far, a nice beginning. Some parts seemed to go a little fast.
But you got me curious to see why the guards would obey Wish. Also the stomach pain Darius has.
Well I gotsta eat, g-bye.
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Interesting story, I liked your summary as it somewhat reminded me of one of my own. Keep it up, I'd be glad to see more of this.
If you want more reviews, you might want to tell people that you will review them in return, or perhaps just allowing anonymous readers to leave reviews. To do that, just go to your settings. It's there somewhere.