great ending. classic

I LOVE IT. I LIKE THE WHOLE IDEA BEHIND THE POEM. IT HAS A KIND OF " GILDED CAGE" FEEL TO IT. THE WHOLE. DRIP. DRIP. THEME THAT KEEPS REPEATING THROUGHOUT THE POEM GIVES THE POEM THAT SPECIAL SOMETHING. ABSOLUTELEY WONDERFUL.

*claps hands* Oh, what a magnificent piece. Your pain seeps so beautifully through each verse. A true work of art. You're a very talented writer. Bravo! :)
Would you consider reading "Scalding Hands"? I'd like to hear from you.