This is a very intresting re-work of psalms 23. :D

Despite the fact that I don't believe in a God, I rather like the idea of Him(Her? It?) as a woman. You've given Psalm 23 an entirely new feel to it.
That's pretty cool.

I think God works much better as a woman-of course God has no gender, but it gets very old trying to find neuter pronouns all the time and "it" is sadly impersonal.

Certainly a different perspective. But you have written it very well. Well done :)
*cosmo-queen*

and somehow that's nasty?
Could you have at least stepped out behind the shield of anonymity? *shakes head*

wow, psalm 23 sounds kinda nasty feminized. that's really wierd

This is very interesting. A whole new meaning and perspective is evident. You've chosen a bold submission. Bravo!