Very nice. And of course I'm sitting here with acoustic matchbox20 blasting in my ears (they're covering time after time from cindy lauper) so everything flows into music, which only makes it ten times better. Short, sweet and to the point - but the reader still sort of wonders *exactly* what the point is. I love that, the fact that it makes me wonder. Great job.

Sounds like the girl in my dorm last semester that I saw at least once a week. Never even said hello. I'm a wuss.

Very, very good. I think everyone has a moment like this. Nothing to worry about ;)

aww, that's such a sweet story! I feel for you

Wow. That was really good. True stories always tend to be better than the 'fictional' (as deemed on this site) ones. lol.
Nice!
***V.R.H***