I searched through your stories to find something alittle shorter [not a fan of long stories] but this was truely beatiful.. I love angst, love me, I bleed for you type writing ya know.. "I write to you a thousand times but than I realize its all in my mind" wow! amazing! bravo!

I like it. Yay for morbidity! _

really well written, i liked it a lot.

I love it :)

this is a beautiful poem and I love it.

*Evelyn Hayden*

absolutely beautiful...I can definitely identify.

oh' I've been there. Very dramatic but I'm sure hits home with so many! You do a great job of displaying that crazed love!

Beautiful. As an ex-cutter, I can identify with the speakers, and I love the way the poem sounds when spoken out loud.

Well this is a morbid little piece.
But it is all the more touching for that actually. A good poem for a semblance of solace in a depression and an academic sort of fun in a brighter mood.
I'm putting you on my Author Alert list.

I love this, the end really gets me.

very deep and thought provoking, I was moved and really enjoyed it. mud-ridden snow suggests that it is spring and kind of distracted me for a little bit trying to figure out how it was relavent to the poem. I would suggest that you keep it crisp clean snow to convey that it is still cold and desolate outside. ofcourse you don't need to change any of it, it was an awesome piece

Very nice. Me likey. This is that awesome semi-morbid stuff i crave.

Good stuff! I like the last line especially!

This is AWESOME! I really like this. I thnk you did an amazing job! The morbid conceptof the poem made it great.
Cirien Phoenix

Wow. *speechless, favories* I loveded it.