*Applauds* Excellent piece. Keep running.

Oh wow. This is amazing. I can't relate to it well, because I don't like running, and I wouldn't give up running just because my boyfriend asked me to. But this is really nice, a story of losing a love and finding it again. I like it.

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this is really good. its like what would happen if you gave up the thing you love most. i really like this!

very good! very well written- you've caotured her feelings perfectly... keep it up!