Oh, man . . . as an insomniac of some years now, this has to be one of the most real poems I've ever read. It's like you can't turn the thoughts OFF sometimes, no matter how badly you want to. The result? The lovely little clock in your room gets the pleasure of informing you that it's 1 o'clock AM . . . 2 o'clock AM . . .

Excellent job. :) ~ TD

*smiles* I like it. It is so Tute! hah now you are pobably gonna get mad at me for that ... oh well it's cute!
~kitish

Awesome poetry. The idea is one I'd never pondered but makes absolute perfect sense, and the rhythm is wonderful. Superb job!

oh thats really good.. i like it.. lol