Heh... This poem made me tear up a bit... It's everything I believe about the world. Balance, ya know? Anyway, thanks for being so eloquent.

Well, another great piece. I think you're incapable of rhyming badly. ;) The opposing images were really very well done - they made a pleasant dichotomy out of the whole thing. ~ TD

Your writing reminds me of an actual published author, and I'm going to go insane trying to figure out whose stuff this sounds like. I'm certainly not accusing you of stealing, I just think they have a similar quality...eh, whoever it was, that was intended as a compliment. ^_^() Clue me in if you happen to get what I mean.

This one has to be the one I like best of yours so far. It's very polished, and I really like how you started and ended it with dark and light. That's all-around spiffy. ^_^

I'm totally loving your poems. The last line of this one is simply awesome. Alas, my reviews grow shorter with each one I write.

Heehee.. Me liken. I like the rhythm and rhyme of it, I could actually do one of those in depth analysis things like we did in ap eng.. but I am far too lazy to do that here... and with out the grade incentive... Loved it.
~kitish

You seem to polarise opposites of nouns and adjectives to make deeper, more profound comparisons between them. The reference to finding yourself within something else can be classified valid, as purpose for self-discovery or enlightenment. Without the darkness, light would flee but don't forget that darkness is but the opposite of light.. the shadow. For one thing cannot exist without its opposite..
-Celestial Sailor

Beautiful poem. "Opposing things, like Time and Space/all hold each other in their place." I loved that line. I also liked the use of contrasts. Well done, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

Normally, rhyming annoys me but it worked very well for some reason when the subject was polar opposites. I love the last two lines! Yay