Heya! Merry christmas! This is so sweet! Adorable..really touching...your bf must be very lucky..great poem..a very..'have faith' really makes it very..romantic :D. Love, Mia

And if that doesn't work smack him one over the head or something!
Spawny

That is so sweet...!
_ Really nice work...I am so happy that you are happy and in love and stuff! :D
Please keep writing!
Namir Swiftpaw

Well your loved one should get a very moving and strong message from this heartfelt moving piece.
I have just put up a new one entitled "The Valiant" check it out if you like.
Well Done
Keep Writing!
F.C

Short, but sincere and direct subjective writing that may have short stanzas, uses words effectively enough for the reader to understand the message being passed across: Have faith in me, do not smother me, let me breathe for I will be here the very next day... but don't forget to love me.
-Celestial Sailor

Beautiful work. I liked the form as well.
Heart of the Sword

I really enjoyed this poem!
I love the way you begin each verse.