... who was she?

Wow this was very captivating and had a lot feeling in it I loved it!

Wow...

It's a good poem, the last lines gave me chills.
One problem I had was the fact it seemed undecided as whether to blame the parents or not. First off it tells them not to blame themselves, then goes into a tangent of how it really is their fault..

yow...intense.

This is so touching, but I actually think it would increase the family's grief rather than alleviate it

powerful piece, here. good job! its awesome.~Liz

This is so sad. A girl at my school commited sucicide last year. She was always happy, just about everybody knew her really well. NOBODY saw it comming. She was So talented and had a REALLY bright future... its just SO sad.

Nice..and here i was thinking that i was alone in writing stuff like this...great job...but i swear dont try killing yourself...it wont help anyone not even you...of course i dont see why im saying this anymore since you are obviously still alive...anywasy sweet writing skills...

i have read actual suicide notes from former friends.

and i give u credit u came close to what a real one would say.

wow... that was so emotional... i loved how you kept on repeating "i'm sorry"... its so sad... but really good...

Very touching. Insitful and truthful. There's much to relate to your poem.

Wow, sounds like what I was thinking last year. I liked it, eventhough I don't usually enjoy free verse. Good job. It's nice to see you can write poetry about reality, and stories about fantasy. Very versitile.

you've tapped into my pool of tears... good job.

This is my personal opinion; and though you don't seem like the kind of person to get offended easily- just warning you.
I like the idea. I like the content. But the poem itself...it doesn't feel like a poem. To be quite honest- it sounds and feels a bit crude. People think that free verse is easy to write, but simply spacing out your words, and skipping lines and such doesn't make a poem. I can see that you wrote this long ago; pershaps you could re-write it? Just a suggestion.
-SGF*
P.S. I'm reading your Vampire story- it's hilarbious. (no, that wasn't a typo; it's always how I say hilarious)