yar dev, this one's wall worthy.

I love this. ( : | The way it starts out - the first line and the wolves - I don't know, there is a great insight into an unusual viewpoint in this, it seems ... the 'let them come', 'let me drink', 'let me sink' ... that pattern - name the fearsome thing, then show how you wish for the thing despite warning, and the repetition (brilliant) ... I think I really enjoy when you use such patterns in your writing. There is also a slight lyrical feel to this. The end is quite morbid, but carris off the feeling well. Good ideas, dude. I especially liked this:
'You said that if I went to the
Forest, the wolves might come.
Let them come, let them come.'
- I think I said that before ... someting about the forest and being warned away from it, like a child ... I am rambling. I had better stop. You know I'm around a bit more for a while anyway ... I look forward to reading more. : ) And thank you for the huge compliments in your bio, lol.