I know how it feels to give up on life in general. Your writing style is really good. Keep it up.

i really like the last 3 paragraphs they'r awesome, thanks for posting the poem

Very nice, very nice. I liked it a hella lot(lol, slang) Nice poem and ur format was wat I call...AWSOME! Nice job here, keep writing!
If u can, plz r and r some of my work too, it means a lot to me.
Thanks!